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My thoughts on Death.
"The House of Suffering"
: Triple Suicide Dancer by Ricky1024
Artwork by cleo85 at FanArtReview.com

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"Triple Suicide Dancer"
By Ricky1024
Written December 20th 2016
December 6th, 2006 8:00AM

"Come, dance with me and be all that you can be?"
"Can't you now see, just where we will be?"
...
"Oh, here we are in my...
'House of Suffering!'
"Welcome and it's about a quarter past eight...
"And, we have a Date?"
"A date with hate to be here!"
"A date with Destiny and Fate!"
"And, a date with...
'Depressive Strife!"
"Watch now while I pick out a knife and try to end my Shitty Life!"
...
"Ah, Yes!"
"That one will do, with the serated edge and the Seven Inch Blade!"
"Wow!"
"Right to and through the breast!"
"To the right of the nipple and that most certainly...
"Didn't Tickel!"
...
"Oh well...
'Tickel Me Elmo' and watch again...
"As I shall demonstrate to...
'MY BITTER END!"
...
"To the left and much harder to the handle's end...
"Damn it again!"
"Hit the valve this time Valentine!"
"Heartly any Heart in there as it bled but I'm still not...
'FUC**** DEAD!"
...
"My 'Guinea Tee' was Crimson Red and yes I sure again, bled but...
"And, again...
"I still was not DEAD?"
...
Come, dance with me and NOW CAN'T YOU SEE?"
"THAT THERE IS DEFINATELY SOMETHING DRASTICALLY WRONG...
"WITH *ME!"
...
"Off with His Head!"
"But no Guillotine?"
"Well look on the floor and there's that knife!"
"Let's try it again but not once or twice!"
...
"To the right..
"Write side...
"Get it right Ricky this time!"
"To the right side...
"Not Once!"
"Not Twice!"
"But...
"FUC****THRICE!"
"Now reviewers...
"What hurt more?"
"The Knife to the Breast or the NECK?"
"What the Heck!"
...
"Dead Wrong!"
"Because...
"You don't feel a thing...
(Physically) but (Mentally)
"The pain is immense and intense as you Do...
(Not by Chance)
"The Triple Suicide *Dance!"
...
"Come, Dance with me and be all that you can be?"
"But we are still Alive by Chance?"
"This ain't turning out to be much of a Romance?"
...
"Ahh, Yes...
"Pills!"
"That's the way as the blood and gore, coats my carpet again...
"Crimson Red!"
"Now, surely I will soon be dead?"
"Jelly Bean?"
"If you know what I mean?"
...
"Depocoate will coat and clothe my pain with...
"A Shard of Distain!"
"The blade missed the Heart but hit the Valve!"
"The blade sliced deep... Thrice into my neck but...
"What the Heck?"
"Missed the Jugular but was never much of an entertainer!"
...
"Come dance with me?"
"As Bloody as can be!"
"Step by Step...
"Side by Insides...
"As we now travel together a path seldom taken...
"Seldom forsaken...
"Jelly Bean...
"If you know what I mean?"







Author Notes
*Dance:
"This was a re-write if the original poem...
"Triple Suide Dance!"
"Special thanks goes out first to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus Christ, Fan Story and Tom the Administrator, Fan Art Review, and this amazing Artist 'cleo85'
And her incedible Picture...
"Pointe Shoes"

     

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