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Tri-fall (see notes)
Luna's Form Poetry
: Dreamy by Luna
To Mickey, with love.
Artwork by MoonWillow at FanArtReview.com

now the day is over
night has come
breathe peace deep inside your stillness
rest your head in clover
hear the hum
of nature in her sleepiness

see, the moon is shining
one moonbeam
falls just ahead of your two feet
come now, best get moving ~
it's your dream
time to climb to your lunar seat

celestial beings all
around you ~
this is true love's heavenly lair
don't worry, you won't fall ~
there are two
angels by your side ever there

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Author Notes
Tri-Fall consists of three 6-line stanzas, for a total of 18 lines. Rhyme scheme is a,b,c,a,b,c and meter for each stanza is 6/3/8,6/3/8.

This form requires little no no punctuation and can be written on any subject matter.

     

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