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A Complex Alliterisen fantasy (see notes)
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: Dragonslayer by Luna
To Mickey, with love.
Artwork by MKFlood at FanArtReview.com

Warring wizard does battle boldly,
spinning spells upon most dangerous dragon ~
with beast beaten and peace proclaimed,
King's court is grateful to our lone legend.
Merry maiden now comes close
and arranges lusty liaison,
as the magic man is so striking.

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Author Notes
The Alliterisen (Complex and Rhyming), a form created by Udit Bhatia, is a simple seven-lined poem with a specific syllable pattern and two alliterations per line. For example: Glorious Graves, and wonderful waves. Alliteration is the succession of similar consonant sounds. They are not recognized by spelling, but rather by sounds. The syllable structure for the Complex Alliterisen is as follows:

1st line- x syllables
2nd line- x+2 syllables
3rd line- x-1 syllables
4th line- (x+2)-1 syllables
5th line- x-2 syllables
6th line- (x+2)-2 syllables
7th line- x syllables

which allows for infinite syllable sequences. Listed below are examples of some easy syllable sequences.

I used this sequence. For more sequences, http://www.shadowpoetry.com

1st line- 9 syllables
2nd line- 11 syllables
3rd line- 8 syllables
4th line- 10 syllables
5th line- 7 syllables
6th line- 9 syllables
7th line- 9 syllables)

     

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