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A lie has tragic consequences.
Remorse by Ogden
Trinet Poetry writing prompt entry

Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of violence.
Remorse

He accuses.
I deny.
He challenges, I oblige, he thrusts,
I parry, my foil finds flesh,
Friend dies.
Fiancee lied.
Never bride.

I killed
My friend!!
My guilty conscience tortures me relentlessly!
Will my consuming contrition continue endlessly?
Iniquitous lie!
Must I
Also die?

I awaken
Relieved, unshaken.
Last night wasn't as it seemed.
No duel, killing, as I deemed.
Deed undone!
Only one
Damnable dream!


Writing Prompt
The Trinet, created by zion, is a form with specific specifications. See the details and an example in the announcement.

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Author Notes
Note: A foil generally is a training weapon. The combatants in the poem were gentlemen, and chose foils with bared points to settle a matter of honor.

     

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