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A Challenge piece between Fastdigits and myself.
A Book of Love
: Raw by justafan




Raw
Desperate emotions
Rampant … inside me
Growing
Changing me
From within


 
Once
Bright
Loving
Chasing dreams
Of forever ….
With you

 
Forever
Changed
By you

 
Now
Envy
Has taken
Root
Envy
Of her looks
Her smile

 
Spawned
 
Jealousy
Of
The way you

Look ... at her
Hold ... her
Kiss ... her
Make loveto her
 
I’ve
Turned
Bitter
Cold
And yes

Dangerous
 
Tread … lightly
My dear

Recognized

Author Notes


I read a piece by "Fastdigits" and knew I wanted to do a challenge piece with him...This is a challenge based on a photo. An Ekphrastic poem ...for your pleasure :)

     

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