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Tanka
Short Form Poetry
: Class of '70 by michaelcahill
Tanka Poetry Contest contest entry


 
sweet innocence--
first loves share trembling kiss

frozen in time

nervous reunion for two
sweet innocence shivers--then warms




 

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Author Notes


It isn't a requirement to follow the 5-7-5-7-7 syllable count.
Mine is 4-6-4-7-8. Total=29 syllables.

I happen to like a pretty picture and a nice display. If you find it objectionable, feel free to pass it by. :))


     

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