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Jack and Jill Went Up the Hill by michaelcahill
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The real story, not the fairy tale.

















Damn! It's like Jill knows her sister's buried here.

 
"Perfect spot, yes?"

 
"I suppose. But, why here?" She's on to me… must've made a mistake… left a clue.

 
"No reason, it's like she's still here…."

 
"But, Laura's not here." It's a setup--she knows, she knows!

 
"Well, we all used to come here—her spirit, I feel it."

 
"It's creepy with her being murdered. What does her spirit tell you?"

 
"Nothing really. It just feels restless."

 
I see it in your eyes. Well, you won't be missing her much longer.

 
"Why are you looking at me like that? Jack? Jack!"






 


Writing Prompt
Take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story in just 100 words. If so, this is your opportunity to shine. The story can be about any subject you wish, creative approaches are of course encouraged. All stories must have the following: Main Character, Setting, Conflict, Resolution.
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Author Notes
Word count: Fanstory & fingers-100... Microsoft Word-99.

     

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