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Watching a saint. ( in five lines; a Gogyoshi)
The Caretaker by LoannaLois
Write a Gogyoshi poem writing prompt entry

The caretaker scurries from kitchen to bath.

She wipes tired hands on her jeans.

Along with a prayer

while she pins back her hair

in her soup she dumps onions and beans.


Writing Prompt
Write a Gogyoshi poem. Gogyoshi is a poem written in five lines. Writing a poem in five lines is its only rule. (no syllable counting needed) The content of gogyohshi is free, its themes are chosen by the poet.

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Author Notes
God bless the caretakers of the world...if you are one, bless you. If you know one, thank them.

     

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