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...and Jill came tumbling after.
Tiny Terrors
: Jack & Jill by Dean Kuch
50 Words Writing Contest contest entry


Her horror began with strange gurgling sounds that echoed deep within the crumbling, ancient well.

Jill approached cautiously, but saw nothing.

The full moon ducked behind a cloud. It was then she felt them touch her. Gnarled, wet hands — alabaster pale — from the well.

It was Jack.

He'd come home.


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Author Notes
50 Words

So, how did you like my take on Jack & Jill? I mean, hadn't you ever wondered?

Thanks for reading.

Pleasant Screams...

     

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