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tanka
tanka (as breeze swirls) by dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Artwork by willie at FanArtReview.com

as breeze swirls
golden leaves float gracefully
dance moves
performed with precision
between passionate lovers
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tanka-5 lines 31 syllables OR FEWER

Thanks to Willie for the awesome artwork

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