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Butterflies are nature's tapestries.
Nature's Poetic Voice.
: Butterfly Magic by Shirley E Kennedy

Butterfly magic
Silkily tickles within
Yellow nectar coats
Sweetest nectar satisfies
Fickle insect satiates
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Author Notes
This is my first attempt at a Tanka so I would appreciate constructive feedback.
A tanka poem has a syllable count of 5,7,5,7,7.
The first three lines are unrhymed.The last two lines have a syllable count of 7.
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