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Consoling a friend.
My Life in words
: I Feel Your Pain. by Jaq Cee
Empathy with Grief writing prompt entry



I watch as your heart breaks
you struggle just to breathe
grief is a soul stealer
I've encountered that thief

I wish you'd never felt
that searing pain inside
it cuts you to the bone
tears your heart open wide

You feel so damn forlorn
like your world's blown apart
bestride lost hopes abyss
as your love does depart

I know how bad it feels
I've walked that road before
let me offer comfort
your hope I will restore




Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any style that shows empathy for the grief of another human being. There are no line length requirements.

Author Notes
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