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: a Cool Breeze by Gypsy Blue Rose
Trigger Warning: poem deals with suicide

 

 

cool breeze

through her black hair

in a vacuous starless night

she carries the vast weight of life

on her marble-cold back

c o n t e m p l a t i n g

to step off  the ledge

her last thought was what he said

“she is a better fit”

 


Author Notes
Fictional Free Verse about Suicide

For those who feel like they are out of options and the only way out is suicide, know that no matter what you are dealing with, life gets better and your life is a precious thing worth saving. You would be missed.

Call the Life Line number 988
988 suicide and crisis phone line

National Alliance on Mental Illness and Suicide Prevention hotline 1-800-950-6264 and text or chat 62640

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy
Pictures from my Pinterest account. Poems and presentations by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright 1/19/25

     

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