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Senryu (rules in my author notes)
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: Not What I Had in Mind by Gypsy Blue Rose
Presentation and Poem by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright 12/29/24

 

 

not what I had in mind

     when you set me up —

with a blind date

 

 


Author Notes
SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo).
the haiku foundation senryu rules

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

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