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Senryu - 5-7-5 - Emotions
Dark Clouds by Trina Layne
Senryu writing prompt entry
Artwork by seshadri_sreenivasan at FanArtReview.com

Undesirable

charcoal clouds crash picnic days

What is loneliness?


Writing Prompt
Write a Senru. A poem that follows the five, seven, and five syllable count (5, 7, 5). 17 syllables in all. Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions.

Author Notes
Do over! It's more deeply reflective than satirical, I think. I hope you enjoy it all the same.

     

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