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Modern Tanka (rules in author notes)
2024 Gypsy's Tanka
: If I can't See You by Gypsy Blue Rose
Presentation and Poem by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright 12/15/24

if I can’t see you

I don’t need my eyes

if I can’t kiss you

     I don’t need my lips —

all I need is my heart to love you

 

 

 

 

Author Notes
Tanka is a Japanese unrhymed five-line poem. English tanka has 31 syllables or LESS because Japanese are different than English syllables. Tanka originated in the 6th century at the Japanese Imperial Court where lovers exchanged tanka poems for each other after a night of passionate lovemaking. With contemporary tanka, the topic varies.
click here if you want to read modern tanka examples click here if you want to read modern tanka rules

Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account. The presentation and poem created by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright 12/15/24

     

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