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Senryu Suite and Katauta Poem
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: Do You Even Care by Gypsy Blue Rose
fictional Love poem. Poems and Presentation by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright

This night!  

the starless sky stirs remembrance

as the wind moans

.

and once again, 

for the  trillionth time,

winter’s veil covers the land. 

.

The space between us

chills my bones 

and spears my heart.

.

Do you even care?

I must be delusional 

to think we’re in love.

.

I’ll scream in despair

in this dark vacuous night

lost in a turbulent sea.

 

 
 
 

Author Notes
vacuous = empty
remembrance = memories

Katauta is an unrhymed 8th-century Japanese poem consisting of 19 syllables with a 5/7/7 pattern. A pair of katauta is called a sedoka. The form was used for poems addressed to a lover like tanka. click here for more info

SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo).
the haiku foundation senryu rules

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Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account. Presentation and poem created by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright @11/14/24

     

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