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How much we need and how much we need to think
Less by Coren McGirr
5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry
Artwork by cleo85 at FanArtReview.com

We truly need less,
        We think less than we need to.
Than we think we do.

Author Notes
I tried something new here. The first and last lines are a sentence, and in the middle is another sentence. I slid the middle verse to the right to have 'less' align with the first verse and 'think' align with the third verse.
I've never written a poem with a visual focus like this before, but I actually quite enjoyed tinkering with it.

     

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