Excellent An inherited estate, a haunted portrait, and a lake that hol Portrait in the Attic by marilyn quillen Ghost Story writing prompt entry

Evelyn never expected to inherit her aunt’s sprawling Victorian estate. The house stood brooding at the edge of a mist-laden lake, a gothic silhouette against the deepening twilight. Stories of whispered warnings and cold spots had peppered family gatherings for as long as she could remember, but Evelyn wasn’t one to be swayed by mere folklore. The moment she stepped inside, the air felt heavy, charged with a stillness that pressed against her skin. She explored room after room, taking in the rich mahogany walls, the faded grandeur of velvet curtains, and the eerie portraits of unsmiling ancestors. But the attic seemed to call to her, a silent summoning she couldn’t shake. As she climbed, the stairs groaned under her weight, flashlight flickering against walls cobwebbed with age. The attic was cluttered with trunks, forgotten dolls with eyes that seemed too aware, and sheet-covered furniture standing like silent sentinels. At the far end of the room hung a portrait. It dominated the space, its gilt frame chipped and tarnished. The woman in the painting wore a lace gown, her dark hair pinned back, and her eyes—deep, almost accusatory—seemed to follow Evelyn’s every move. Lydia Greyson, 1879, read the nameplate. Evelyn stepped back, uneasy, when a draft swept past, carrying with it a faint, brittle voice. “Stay…” She froze. The air grew cold enough for her breath to fog, and when she glanced at the portrait again, the woman’s expression had changed. The subtle smile was now a frantic frown, eyes hollow and pleading. That night, sleep was impossible. At exactly 3:13 a.m., the grandfather clock below chimed, but its echoes were accompanied by soft footsteps that paced the hall outside her door. She listened, heart pounding, as the footsteps paused, and then a cold, ghostly knock rapped against the wood. “Help me…” The voice was unmistakable this time—female, trembling with sorrow. Evelyn stayed up until dawn, unable to convince herself it had been a dream. Driven by fear and fascination, she spent the next day in the attic, searching for answers. She found a small diary bound in cracked leather, pages filled with delicate handwriting. Lydia Greyson’s voice leaped off the paper. Lydia wrote of her secret love, Thomas, a groundskeeper who had won her heart. But their affair ended in tragedy when he vanished without a trace. Lydia had been accused of conspiring with him to steal from the estate’s collections, marked a witch for her supernatural influence on him. Her isolation turned to despair, and her final entry, barely legible, read: “He is lost to the depths, and soon, so shall I be.” That night, Evelyn felt Lydia’s presence stronger than ever. The whispers began as soon as the clock struck 3:13. This time, they were joined by the unmistakable sound of water dripping, even though the house was dry. Evelyn followed the sound, heart racing, to the lake behind the house. Moonlight splintered across the surface, and the air carried a metallic chill that stung her skin. She stepped into the water, the cold biting through her clothes. Suddenly, a fierce and unrelenting pull yanked at her wrist. She gasped, looking down, only to see Lydia’s reflection, no longer the pale portrait but vivid and real, eyes wide with desperation. The water roiled, bubbling up as if something—or someone—was clawing from below. “I’ll help you!” Evelyn screamed, not knowing whether it was for Lydia or herself. The water stilled, and something metallic brushed against her fingers. A rusted locket rose to the surface, Thomas’s image preserved inside, eyes hopeful even in decay. The moment her fingers closed around it, the cold lifted. The lake fell silent, and a warmth spread through Evelyn like a long-held breath finally released. When she returned to the attic, she noticed an uncanny change. The portrait of Lydia now bore a serene expression, her eyes at peace. But what struck Evelyn most was the locket—a perfect, gleaming match to the one she had found—now resting around Lydia’s neck in the painting as if it had always been there. The chill that had haunted the room for years was gone, replaced with a soft, comforting warmth. Evelyn lingered, the silence humming with a quiet sense of closure. She reached out and touched the edge of the frame, feeling an unexpected connection as if Lydia’s spirit, now free, offered gratitude for Evelyn’s unwitting part in her story. From that night forward, the whispers ceased, the chill dissipated, and the house stood no longer haunted but finally at peace. Evelyn knew that Lydia’s story had been set to rest, her once-lost love returned, if only in spirit. Writing Prompt Write a Ghost Story. No limit on the word count. No poetry.

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