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Tanka Poems (rules in author notes
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: Sky and Sea by Gypsy Blue Rose
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touch me 

at the edge of night

when the moon starts to fade

and stardust scatters 

over the break of dawn

 

touch me

where waves tickle my toes

as the flooding tides roll

over my footprints on shore 

and ebb tides take them and go

 


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Author Notes
Tanka is a Japanese unrhymed poem with 31 syllables arranged in five lines; English tanka is 31 syllables or LESS because Japanese and English syllables are different. Tanka originated in the 6th century at the Japanese Imperial Court where lovers exchanged tanka poems for each other after a night of passionate lovemaking. With contemporary tanka the topic varies.

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Gypsy

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