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It's a Private Party by Begin Again

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Don't go!"

"Layla, it's not haunted."

"I'm staying here, Abby."


 

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Inside, Abby snapped photos.

Chuckling, she asked, "Anyone home?"

Her recorder crackled.

She rewound and listened.

Someone snarled, "Get out! "

A shadow shifted. The door slammed.
 
Words echoed. "You shouldn't have come."
 
Layla's reflection was in the mirror.

 

 
 
 
 

 
 

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