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This is about using a newly fixed apple press
Sealed by Jewell Hermann
2-4-2 Poetry contest entry

Fresh press
 
Crush, apples dropped 
 
Prize drips.
 

Author Notes
Constructive criticism highly appreciated, Positive comments are nice, but that's not all I want to see.

     

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