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Haiku (rules in author notes)
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: Fancy Squirrel by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

fancy squirrel

  makes fun of the mouse who wears —

last season’s coat

 

 

Author Notes
a little monday humor

HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment. It resonates on a deeper level, enlightening the reader and making an insightful connection. English Haiku doesn't have to follow the 5/7/5 form, because the concept of a syllable is different in Japanese than you may be used to with English. In Japanese, each KANA character is its own syllable.


For example, a famous haiku by haiku master, Matsuo Basho:

In japanese (5/7/5):

Furu ike ya
kawazu tobikomu
mizu no oto

Fu/ru i/ke ya (5 syllables)
ka/wa/zu to/bi/ko/mu (7 syllables)
mi/zu no o/to (5 syllables)

Same haiku translated to English language 2/3/4:

old pond (2 syllables)
frog jumps in – (3 syllables)
sound of water (4 syllables)

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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

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