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Gogyohka Poem Suite
2024 Japanese Poetry
: Our Woven Hearts by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

dawn is breaking,

I wonder if you see it too

I like to think

it’s the same sun 

for me and you

 

 

our hearts are woven 

but tonight you’re not mine

because you’re not by my side

the moon is pale

and the stars will not shine

 

 

Author Notes
Gogyohka is a five-line Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. You may use any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay. It usually doesn't rhyme, but it's optional. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe.
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