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Gogyohka Poem
2024 Japanese Poetry
: * The Wind of Change * by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

    Fall is coming —

whispering between bared trees

as crimson leaves 

rustle and whoosh

carried by the wind of change

 

 
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
"Take me to the magic of the moment
on a glorious night
where children of tomorrow dream
in the wind of change" - 'the Wind of Change' song by the Scorpions

Gogyohka is a five-line Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. You may use any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay. It usually doesn't rhyme, but natural not forced rhymes are okay. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe.
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