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When you forget the magic in the world you suffer
We've Lost our Sight by Mia Twysted
Rhyming Poem contest entry
Artwork by avmurray at FanArtReview.com

We've lost our sight
No day
No night
 
We were the sun. We were so bright
How we danced. I loved the way
It felt so right
 
We've lost our sight
No day
No night
 
Now, our life is fight or flight
No truth within the day
We were lost to what is right and wrong
 
We've lost our sight
No day
No night
 
We raised ourselves to such a height
Believing there is no need to pray
Diminishing our guiding light
 
We've lost our sight
No day
No night
 
It felt so right
No truth within the day
We raised ourselves to such a height
 
We've lost our sight
No day
No night
 
Diminishing our guiding light
How we danced. I loved the way
We were lost to what is wrong and right
 
We've lost our sight
No day
No night
 
We were the sun. We were so bright
Believing there's no need to pray
Now, our life is fight or flight
 
We've lost our sight
No day
No night

Author Notes
Scheme ABA
I was challeneded to take the last rhyming words in any poem and make a poem from them. I choose Do Not Go Gentle Into that Good Night.

     

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