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Kanshi Poem for the Japanese Poetry Club
2024 Japanese Poetry
: Gazing at Crystal Stars by Gypsy Blue Rose
Everyone is Welcome to Join the Japanese Poetry Club

Gazing at crystal stars  

and waving bare boughs  

we bask in the crisp Fall breeze.   

Doves perch on our windowsill

singing with a joyful trill.

I revel in your embrace

as I feel your warm caress

you set my heart aflame.

 
 

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Kanshi is a Japanese Poetic form that originated during the Tang dynasty in China. You may write one or more stanzas. Kanshi had multiple forms, rhymed or free verse but most notable were in 5 to 7 syllables in 4 to 8 lines.

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