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2024 Gypsy's Tanka
: The Birthday Girl by Gypsy Blue Rose
dedicated to all the birthday girls


The Birthday Girl
 


no more innocence

no more walks on the beach

no more looking for treasures

no more playing in the sea
 



as a child

the beach was a wonderland

with fishstars, smooth stones,

blue smooth glass, seashells,

and mom's delicious snacks
 



as a young woman

the ocean meant romance

passion and dance

but all of that is gone
 
 
 

meditating cross-legged

facing Mother Ocean

the ebb carries

her old memories

into the sea
 



all and all

she has no regrets

today is her birthday
 
one year more
 
one year less
 
 


she is comforted

with a thought,

 getting old is not bad—
 
it means you're still alive 
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
This free verse poem is about growing old from a woman's perspective.

This is just a poem. Many older women have full happy lives, they are vibrant, and in good health. But most women can probably relate more or less.

Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account. I don't use a presentation template, the complete presentation and poem created by Gypsy Blue Rose COPYRIGHT@2024

     

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