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5 Senses Free verse no punctuation and in lowercase
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: Stars Tremble in Blue by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
stars tremble in blue
as children and elders
make a wish or two
 
 
summer-night winds
dance and sing
between ancient trees
 
 
jasmin-imbued breeze
slides between the blinds
and blends with grandma's hot cocoa delight
 
 
after my treat
I go to bed and get tucked in
by grandma and mom
 
 
their spirits linger in my heart
 
 
 
 

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Author Notes
I used the 5 senses: touch, sight, taste, smell, and sound

My mother and grandmother died a long ago but I feel their spirits.

In the top picture, the phrase, "Shaken, not stirred" is inspired by the fictional character, Agent 007 James Bond's famous phrase. It's the way he prefers his martini cocktail.

Some phrases are poetic expressions, not to be taken literally, such as "the stars tremble in blue.

Poem and presentation created by me, Gypsy blue rose@copyright2024

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Thank you very much, for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

     

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