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A Teikei-shi for the club
The Guy You Love to Hate by Debi Pick Marquette


this guy thinks he's great


he will not communicate

 but loves to debate

 and if she'd been thinking straight

she'd have picked a better mate


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Teikei-shi is a rhymed Japanese poem, a rare form since most Japanese poetry is free verse. The first Chinese poems that appeared in Japan were classified as this type of poetry. The syllable count is 31 syllables or less in 5 lines with a 5-7-5-7-7 form.

     

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