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: I Feel Your Touch by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

I feel your touch

when the gusty summer breeze

caresses me

I'm rocked gently 

by trees swaying in the wind

amidst dewy reeds

undress me

with your blue starry eyes

disrobing my translucent gown

embrace me at night 

when the tide comes and goes 

with moody waves

I feel your touch

day and night

by land or by sea

 

 

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Author Notes
SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo).
the haiku foundation senryu rules

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

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