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Gogyohka Poem
2024 Japanese Poetry
: With Firm Aim by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

 

with firm aim 

the shot catches his prey

as her heart pounds in its chest

    the wounded doe meets her fate—

scarlet trail to its end 

 

 

 
 
 

Author Notes
Gogyohka is a five-line Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. You may use any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay. It usually doesn't rhyme, but natural not forced rhymes are okay. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe.
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