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Haiku (rules in author notes)
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: Even the Breeze by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
 
  even the breeze holds its breath—

    as the beautiful gazelle

passes by
 
 
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment. It resonates on a deeper level, enlightening the reader and making an insightful connection. English Haiku doesn't follow the 5/7/5 form, because Japanese syllables are much shorter. The rule of thumb is to write it as succinctly as possible and 17 syllables or less.


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Gypsy

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