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A better way to live with grief.
My Silly Commandments by Libby Keers
Rhyming Poetry Contest contest entry
Artwork by Zao at FanArtReview.com

Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of language.

Thou shalt befriend grief

not forget all their belief.

Thou shalt not take death too personally 

Its intentions are not of a thief!

Thou shalt live for the dead,

not because they are gone 

perhaps because they are ahead.

Thou shalt feel all they can,

instead of screaming as you ran. 

Thou shalt not worry and ache..

rather manifest what you want to take!

“Thou shall not sin”

fuck.

Thou shalt attend goodwill bin!

perhaps find a shirt with a funky fish fin :)


Author Notes
I wrote this on a more accepting day while grieving my bestfriend. Every time I see a sunflower, it reminds me of her. I know she’s waiting for me somewhere.

     

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