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Contemporary Tanka (rules in my author notes)
2024 Gypsy's Tanka
: The Edge of Night by Gypsy Blue Rose
poem in black font in my author notes

 

I'll meet you

    at the edge of night—

where your dreams end

and the break of dawn

awaits with open arms
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
POEM:
l'll meet you
at the edge of night
where your dreams end
and the break of dawn
awaits with open arms
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Contemporary Tanka is a Japanese unrhymed poem with 12 to 31 syllables arranged in five lines. The first poets who wrote tanka imitated the Japanese models of a 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic structure in five lines. This resulted in poems that were too long in comparison to Japanese tanka. The first tanka were padded or chopped to meet the fixed number of syllables. Additionally, the third line must transition from the descriptive and image-focused beginning lines into a reflective metaphor, simile, or personification for the closing lines. The subject matter varies, but most tanka are emotionally stirring or profound, and many are about love. click here if you want to read modern tanka examples === click here to read Tanka Society of America === click here if you want to read modern tanka rules
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