Excellent A poem about missed connections. Bethany's Gaze by Tomisin👀 ABC Poetry Contest contest entry

...."And if you stroll through town you'll find a little girl, Bethany Bright is her name; 'Cause her dimpled smile and an eye  like a pearl, Drives out our sin and shame, From turning a blind eye to her, and avoiding her hidden one-eyed disdain".... Author Notes Hello! Any feedback would be highly appreciated.Thank you for your support!

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