Making a Sestina by Bill Schott Teach Me Something (2) writing prompt entry |
There are many idiosyncrasies involved in sculpting a patterned poem. When there are so many, sometimes poets will make adjustments to keep their original thoughts above the need to fold into a format. Sonnets, for example, evolve from Petrarch to Wyatt, Spenser to Shakespeare, and on to the modern forms which shed syllabic and staging tenants. Haiku have dozens of forms which, we are told, represent different moods and purposes for the poetic variances. All these forms are mentioned to lead us to the sestina. According to Google: “a sestina is a fixed verse form consisting of six stanzas of six lines each, normally followed by a three-line envoi. The words that end each line of the first stanza are used as line endings in each of the following stanzas, rotated in a set pattern.” The best way I have found to begin this poem is to cultivate the “end words” that will be used and reused in the poem. There will only be six end words which will appear at the end of each sestet, or six-word stanza. First, choose a subject. Let’s say COWBOYS. Next, find six words that connect with this subject. Let’s decide on these words: lasso, cattle, saddle, dusters, lonesome, and brand Since these will be the last words in the poetic lines, begin by assigning each a number. 1 lasso 2 cattle 3 saddle 4 dusters 5 lonesome 6 brand There will be six six-line stanzas and an envoi. The first will be as the example above, while the succeeding stanzas will rearrange the end words like this: LAST word, FIRST, second to last, second, lower middle, and upper middle. So, the framework will look like this, reading top to bottom, column by column: 1 6 3 5 4 2 1 2 1 6 3 5 4 2 3 5 4 2 1 6 3 4 2 1 6 3 5 4 5 4 2 1 6 3 5 6 3 5 4 2 1 6 Then, we assign the end words to the numbered order: 1 2 3 4 5 6 envoi lasso brand saddle lonesome dusters cattle lasso cattle lasso brand saddle lonesome dusters cattle saddle lonesome dusters cattle lasso brand saddle dusters cattle lasso brand saddle lonesome dusters lonesome dusters cattle lasso brand saddle lonesome brand saddle lonesome dusters cattle lasso brand Place the stanza end words in order, then the envoi can take on a few different formats. The easiest one, which I am using here, is 1-2, 3-4, 5-6 on the three last lines. The even numbered word would be the end word, and the odd numbered word will appear somewhere in the line. lasso-cattle saddle-dusters lonesome-brand So, the next step is to fill in the lines with words that make sense and support the subject -- cowboy. The use of syllable count is varied, but mostly eight or ten syllables. Meter can be used or not, and varied lengths of lines is also an option.
spins his trusty rope into a lasso rings a certain cow among the cattle cinches the strained line onto his saddle the sand and sediment tests his dusters a man upon a horse may seem lonesome the sight alone on horseback is his brand the time has come to institute a brand he forms a working loop with a lasso the cow-eyed steer may feel a bit lonesome observed by useless kin -- other cattle cow pies jump and splash against his dusters cannot reach the cowboy in his saddle he pulls the iron bar from his saddle to heat the bent initial for the brand the fire's heat challenges his dusters the tension tests the strength of his lasso observed by tethered fire-hating cattle all leaving the cowboy further lonesome the shadow of our cowboy seems lonesome man alone within a stream of cattle humanity above and in his saddle the keeper of the heated stick to brand the hold of the neck-embracing lasso behold the vested cowboy in dusters the sandy desert falls from his dusters like the desert he still remains lonesome on the horn of his saddle hangs a lasso the lasso that hangs from his saddle charred on his boot is the ranch's brand which also appears on the sides of cattle so few cowboys to stay with the cattle so few cowboys to wear their dusters so few cowboys to issue the brand the cowboys so truly are lonesome no one to sit alone in a saddle no one to circle and tass a lasso he tosses the lasso towards the cattle upon his saddle attired with dusters the cowboy with lonesome as his brand Once the initial poem is written, work to make it better before posting. Sometimes you may choose to change an end word. That’s fine, remembering that they all change in each stanza and continue to make sense.
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