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Gogyohka Poems
2024 Japanese Poetry
: Jump Into the Deep End by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
dive into my waters

I'll cover you from head to toe

with salty kisses

and untamable waves

to satisfy your soul
 


jump into the deep end

I'll show you how to let go

surrender your fear

of uninhibited desire

and embrace a sea of passion



 
 

Author Notes
Ocean personification

Gogyohka is a five-line Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. You may use any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay. It usually doesn't rhyme, but natural not forced rhymes are okay. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe.
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