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Failing! by Julie G1
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Let me spin a yarn, reality,
Failing the weight loss industry,
No binge eating any more,
Comfort food had left the store,
"NO COOKIES!", so hard,
Lettuce leaves by the yard,
Must stop pretending, I say,
Hobbit's second breakfast, okay,
Time to accept, destress, funny,
Now home for raisin toast and tea, 
Hot and sweet, fat like me!
"Yes, failed weight loss totally! 
 

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