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Freedom - priced quite nicely... by Chip Whitley
Happy Independence Day writing prompt entry

Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of violence.

That starry blue

That crimson hue.

White lines straight and narrow

Plowed precisely in harrow.

 

Souls of bygone eras scorch

The glowing altar, liberty’s porch.

Rough men’s veins split for those profound

For weaker folks inactions inter the rows.

No recompense, no justice, for those rough men, I suppose.

 

Torch is carried, weighty and tarried

Begins to sag my shoulders wearied.

The strain of that yoke, those friends who can’t joke,

Won’t lighten on its own, the pain bespoke.

 

Our foundational foundation is heard a deafening moan

Sacrifices many, some to the bone.

Many gave all and all cared not

Our blessed country, an uncommon plot.



Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any type about Independence Day or share your thoughts about this day.

     

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