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Gogyohka Poem
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: Craving his Love by Gypsy Blue Rose

I can crave his love

all I want on this long night

but the new moon is dark

the stars left with a piece of sky

and all the red wine is gone

 

 

Author Notes
a new moon is dark

Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe.
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