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senryu
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: Moonless Starless Sky by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

 moonless starless sky,

old man drinks alone on his porch—

  lonesome


Author Notes
SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo). Classical senryu was humorous and sarcastic. With time, it has developed into a loser form with any theme.

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Gypsy

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