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: Looking at the Moon by Gypsy Blue Rose
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looking at the moon

under a veil of longing

covering desire

and red sweltering passion



I want to kiss you

all over your sun-kissed skin

tastes like salty sea
 


I'll wait till the end of time
 
where the shore meets the ocean
 
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
CHOKA-It's a Japanese court poetic form of the 6th to 14th century consisting of nine-lines in a 5/7/5/7/5/7/5/7/7 syllables pattern and may be repeated.

Start your choka with a couplet that introduces your theme or sets the tone for your poem. This can be a concise statement or an image that captures the essence of your topic.
Next, you develop your poem by expanding on the initial couplet. Each subsequent couplet should build upon the previous one, forming a thematic progression. You can explore different aspects, emotions, or perspectives related to your chosen theme.
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Gypsy "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

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