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: Betrayal by Sarah Probe S.
Betrayal Poetry Contest contest entry

Between us and the skies, strong bridges I had built,

And I wanted us both to remain exclusive,

The world around us to be vanishing,

But you opened the doors to my secret garden,

You have let all of my enemies in,

All those demons have invaded my space,

You have let them all destroy my fortress.....


Author Notes
portraying the devastating impact of lovers haters ( 7 verses of 12-12-10-12-10-10 )

     

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