Excellent A Rensaku, or multiple haiku's strung together. The Twilight by Lilly Desdemona

Dreams oh so endless What have you done to me now Stuck betwixt waking A twilight most foul Spent on the dimly lit shore Sol and lune above   Useless cry for help Out to the endless ocean Only cold wind blow From dizzying heights To the stomach churning depths Rest just fantasy Set out on her waves Cruel turning of the sea Nausea a flood Salt air burns the eyes Leaving its powdery dust Cold winds dry the lungs Escaped upon dawn Cruel ocean's vision fades Morning light splits dark   Mind left asunder Faded visions rush away Night banished again Author Notes A poem about fleeting dreams that escape one's mind upon returning to the waking world.

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