Excellent The Beloved of God Transition by GoWiSt      Sedoka Poem Contest Winner

With much grief they came,  gathering with muffled cries  to wish their loved one farewell.    With great cries of joy,  a throng of heavenly hosts  now welcome their loved one home.    Writing Prompt For this challenge you will write a sedoka. This is a Japanese form that consists of two unrhymed poems that MAY show the same scene from two different perspectives or angles. Each one has a syllable count of 5/5/7 Here's an example: The cat's meowing Pleads her case convincingly Hunger gleams in golden eyes Missus Smith's tutting Suggests the cat's been eating Far too much for her own good Sedoka Poem Contest Winner Author Notes PLEASE NOTE: the correct syllable count for this Sedoka poem is 5-7-7 (and not 5-5-7). This correction is noted by the contest creator in a thread on the contest page.

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