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A midnight rendezvous of romance
Love's First Dance by BermyBye50
Sedoka Poem writing prompt entry


In moonlight's embrace,

Love's first dance, a whispered waltz,

Hearts entwined, as stars applaud.

~~~~~~

Beneath silver beams,

A lover's touch, gentle sway,

Echoes of dreams softly stir.



Writing Prompt
For this challenge you will write a sedoka.
This is a Japanese form that consists of two unrhymed poems that MAY show the same scene from two different perspectives or angles.
Each one has a syllable count of 5/5/7

Here's an example:

The cat's meowing
Pleads her case convincingly
Hunger gleams in golden eyes

Missus Smith's tutting
Suggests the cat's been eating
Far too much for her own good

Author Notes
Sedoka 1: From His Perspective

Sedoka 2: From Her Perspective

     

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