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Love to watch the little guys enjoy their meal.
Breakfast Guests by HarryT
    Sedoka Poem Contest Winner 

 
Morning dawns quiet
Birds, squirrel and a rabbit
Waiting to share their breakfast

I spread fresh birdseed
Watch the little guys enjoy
While sipping hot black coffee
 


Writing Prompt
For this challenge you will write a sedoka.
This is a Japanese form that consists of two unrhymed poems that MAY show the same scene from two different perspectives or angles.
Each one has a syllable count of 5/5/7

Here's an example:

The cat's meowing
Pleads her case convincingly
Hunger gleams in golden eyes

Missus Smith's tutting
Suggests the cat's been eating
Far too much for her own good
Sedoka Poem
Contest Winner

Author Notes
Enjoy watching animals and birds at breakfast time.

     

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