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A sedoka poem
Walking upon drifting sands by kahpot
Sedoka Poem writing prompt entry

 

 

your absence finds me
sleeping 'mong the drifting sands
reflecting on ocean's ebb
~~
'pon instant return
I'll build our castle of love
raising, drowning emotions

 
 


Writing Prompt
For this challenge you will write a sedoka.
This is a Japanese form that consists of two unrhymed poems that MAY show the same scene from two different perspectives or angles.
Each one has a syllable count of 5/5/7

Here's an example:

The cat's meowing
Pleads her case convincingly
Hunger gleams in golden eyes

Missus Smith's tutting
Suggests the cat's been eating
Far too much for her own good

     

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