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Contemporary Senryu (rules in my author notes)
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: ~ She Rises ~ by Gypsy Blue Rose

she rises 

with sun-loving coneflowers

and aroused roosters

she dances 

with chilled breeze

visibly excited

she dreams

about touching his suntanned skin

and kiss his alluring  lips

 

 


Author Notes
CONTEMPORARY SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo). Classical senryu was humorous and sarcastic. With time, it has developed into a loser form with any theme.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poems.

Gypsy

pictures from my Pinterest account, I use two programs for my presentations- ImageShack and Windows' Paint

     

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